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  CedarBough (74) 2008-04-13 8:52

it is too bad the sky is so close in color to the blossoms, the photo is composed well, and I appreciate the fish-eye effect, the only problem here really is the bad luck you had with weather.

  CedarBough (74) 2006-11-25 7:20

I love this photo. The woman who is facing us is clear enough and the sharp focus on the shopper and her potential purchase plus the eyes of the other woman focused on that same item really bring the photo together. The star of the shot, I think, should be the lovely fabric both on the women and in the one woman's hands. I love it, if you were still there, I'd be asking you to send me some! And it works very well with B and W because of the texture. Great photo.

  CedarBough (74) 2006-11-25 7:10

Fantastic expressions, movement, tones. You have a real gift. The only problem I am seeing here is perhaps less room at the top (that's simple enough to crop post click). Love these girls, they jumped out at me off your page.

  CedarBough (74) 2006-11-22 2:44

Daniel, this is a really awesome shot in many ways. I love teh tones, and the moment. The only thing I don't like is the composition. I just wish there was less room behind the puppy. OTherwise, it's very good.

  CedarBough (74) 2006-04-26 9:09

Lovely shot. Great DOF to get the boy in more focus would have helped, but it's really a lovely shot. The colors, the clear focus on the rear childs eyes, the expressions combined with the yearning to be outside... good job.

  CedarBough (74) 2006-04-26 9:05

Fun shot, thanks for sharing. It's not crisp anywhere, but considering it was exposed from a perch on a rock, I think you did great.

  CedarBough (74) 2006-04-26 9:01

Needs focus. Nice subject, though.

  CedarBough (74) 2006-04-23 14:16

Lovely girls, lovely tone, almost lovely composition (I feel like a little too much missing from the bottom right girl, I think because she's cut on 2 sides). Good job. Their smiles are just sweet as could be.

  CedarBough (74) 2006-04-23 14:07

What kind of camera is this on? Film or digital? Format-- medium? Tripod? I just really think it came out well, and I'd like to know more technical details. It can be very challenging to show the trees properly (I still don't have "the cherry blossom photo" of my own) but you found a great spot and executed the shot well.

  CedarBough (74) 2006-04-23 14:01

You might consider cloning that one green spot in the upper right to have a few more red poppies in it to help balance the shot. Otherwise, very nice.