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jalab_temen (2193) 2012-03-12 13:55

Hi Phil, I love this song, and honestly, it perfectly fits to this composition: the melody is something totally American with some nice exotic scents, and so do this image. Just look at the skyline of the globalized metropolitan city in the background works as coulisse and the replica of the old boat is like a key element of the decor in the limelight. BR from Hungary

jalab_temen (2193) 2012-03-12 13:47

I like this photo where two totally different worlds meet, and the connection is transcendential beauty. However, it is a bit over-satured for my taste, this photo works, because it captures me. Regards from Hungary

jalab_temen (2193) 2011-12-14 6:58

Salut Claude, I like this image, espacially the compo with the huge two-dimnesional, painted dream-like pattern, the girl with shut eyes and the deep darkness everywhere. Forget about technical aspects if you can create such an expressive photo! Thanks for sharing.

jalab_temen (2193) 2011-12-14 6:40

Hi Will, I like your pic, espacially the unusual POV. The city seems to be a toy, or some kind of maquette because it is slightly oversatured. By the way the notes are also really interesting! Thx!

jalab_temen (2193) 2011-12-14 6:27

Hola Manuel, It is like a baroque masterpiece with overwhelming golden tones, endless seas and in order to exaggarate contrast of perfectness of natura there are some freight ships. I like this storytelling photo, especially its composition. Thanks!

jalab_temen (2193) 2011-12-13 8:54

Hi Mehrdad, the pic is really interesting: the tomb seems floating between the light ground and the light sky. I might prefer compsitions with less empty parts (I might have cut a bit) and putting the main object to the very centre or using the golden ratio [(a+b):a = a:b] but it depends on personal taste. Best wishes!

jalab_temen (2193) 2011-12-13 8:42

Hi Gunnar! The peaceful atmosphere o fthis delicate portrait is the most impressive for me. The warm orange patches of the tapestry, the painting, the pumpkins (in the BG), the cup and the cover of the book make the compo well-balanced. Special thanks for detailed info of the novel and the venue. BR

jalab_temen (2193) 2011-12-13 8:37

Ciao Silvio, you are the Master of Composition! By the way the silhouette of the man standing under the shadow gives a mysterious feeling to the pic. Thanks for sharing.

jalab_temen (2193) 2011-12-13 8:32

(R)URAL - what a title, what a strange golden-yellow grass. Never mind quality, this oic has a really intensive, almost surrealistic atmosphere. Thanks for sharing!

jalab_temen (2193) 2011-12-13 8:26

Ciao Giouseppe! Congratulations to your 3rd "TEnniversary"! Anyway your uploaded pic is also really interesting. This old tree might have been witness of many interesting situations, while the red stones of the legendary Monument valley gives perfect atmosphere. The composition could have been a bit more effective since I feel something missing from the upper right corner. Best regards!