Eitai-Bashi Bridge, a photo from 東京, 関東

Photographer's Note

Blue world, the walkway of bridge. If it were in
summer, much better.

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stiginthedump (1833) 2007-10-10 23:52

Nice to see more of your bridge shots Che. I commented on another saying how nice it would be to have a human figure more closer, but its also nice to see a 'portrait' of a bridge that has a bit of 'character' to it! This shot is interesting, and the deep blue of it is very pleasing, but I think you need to crop off some of the background. That way, we'd be able to concentrate on the bridge more. I've done a workshop to show you what I mean.

Thanks

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BlkDaffyDuck (385) 2007-10-11 1:26

Hello Che Guevara,

Original compostion and good colors but it missing a subject in your picture and the building in the background aren't more beautiful effect.
Maybe with a walk man or woman in the bridge this picture would have taken interest ?

Regards,
Damien.

travis_b (912) 2007-10-18 7:33

Hey

Very good and suggestive urban scene. The domination of the blue is something that i like a lot. That bridge seems to be a good object for taking night shots. Nice job. Cheers!