Awa Dancers #2, a photo from 東京, 関東

Photographer's Note

As a finale, all dancers toghter at one spot and sparkle.

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goodwill (4274) 2013-08-15 7:44

Hi Takero,
I am sure the hard disk of your computer has many great images. Its surprising to see this image uploaded by you, may be purposefully.
Sincerely speaking, the back of the dancers is the biggest negative point in this image. The arms are visible and the feet both in blur and without blur, but the hands of the dancers, I find difficult to find.
They seem to be lost in the background.
To me this is not the composition, which is the trade mark and authenticity of Takero.
Sincerely yours,
Rajeev

SnapRJW (31631) 2013-08-15 9:03

Hello Takero - I like this 3/4 back view of the dancers as it gives us the opportunity to see another aspect of their gorgeous, traditional costumes. I can see from the movement that these girls have spent many hours perfecting their timing as they are all in sinc. The nice little blur on the feet adds to the feeling of movement. Warmest regards rosemary

abmdsudi (95869) 2013-08-16 7:42

Pak Takero YTH
Dansā-tachi wa, karera ga dōki kurariti ni ugoku yō ni dainamizumu o kuwaeru ugoki no sensu ga hontōni yoku medatsu tsukuri raburī migotona kiiro no iro dakedenaku, watashi wa seibun ga umaku iku to omou yūshūna fuka-sade yoi roshutsu seigyo to subarashīdesuga, watashi wa arenji o aishi, Reiauto. Mōhitotsu no yoi akushon ga totemo yoku satsuei satsuei. Omedetōgozaimasu. Arigatō