緑の中の卵, a photo from 東京, 関東

Photographer's Note

葉の上に小鳥の卵の殻が落ちていました。

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cosyCloud (158) 2003-08-31 4:51

Stunning photo. The colour and detail are fantastic. And I like that the eggshell isn't in the middle of the photo.
Wonderful!
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色及び細部は素晴らしい! 私は卵の殼の位置を好む。すばらしい写真!

billyt (101) 2003-08-31 4:57

A lovely shot like it a lot, you could improve this in Photoshop though by burning in the inside of the shell albeing there is more detail in the file, the detail as just blown out a little. I love the shot though, so simple yet very effective.

Nina (5099) 2003-08-31 6:40

Well seen and photographed. I love the colours, curves of the leaf veins and the composition. I have one small suggestion that would improve it in my eyes: crop a little of the bottom, where the leaf is out of focus.

zto (268) 2003-08-31 12:58

Wonderfull shot. You can almost feel the leaf as if you tuched it and the composition is great. So simple yet so effective. Great job. i agree with billyt though, if it is possible to enjance some more detail on the inside of the shell.

thien (2112) 2003-08-31 20:22

Superb details and colors. So pretty and the off centered composition is excellent. I agree that a slight crop at the bottom would further enhance this beautiful photo.

Darren (6823) 2003-09-02 8:18

This is really excellent. I think your composition is perfect, and I think the DOF works very well here too. Really, not much to add, just that this is well done.

roconnell (327) 2003-12-18 0:53