狭い, a photo from 東京, 関東

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鳥越祭でお御輿を担いでいる

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sita4ram (814) 2003-09-06 2:58

hi mike
this shot has great potential, but its too tightly cropped. so it makes it a good shot with unfortunate composition.
is it the original or is the original bigger?
if so I would recomment a different cropping. leave some more on the left and bottom. just so the eye will be able to try and look at what he is looking at.

philip_coggan (11) 2003-09-06 3:53

He's saying, "Get yer ear outta my eye!" :-)

BobTrips (1857) 2003-09-06 21:50

I think a stronger crop is called for. I'm distracted by the unidentifiable 'stuff' at the right.

I posted a Workshop to let you see my idea. I also darkened the headband writing and brought down the brightness of the shot to make it a bit 'heavier'.

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Photo Information

Copyright: Mike Chachich (mdchachi) (1612)
Genre: 人間
Medium: 白黒
Date Taken: 1998-06-06
Categories: 祭り
Camera: Canon EOS 5, Canon EF 75-300mm f/4-5.6 IS
Details：　(Fill) Flash：　Yes
Photo Version：　Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s)：　Omatsuri, Don't Rain on My Parade, My Favorite Shots [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2003-09-05 22:42