Photographer's Note
東京での日常のヒトコマを切り取りました。
この日は天気もよく、「桜が咲いてる!=春が来た!」と、とてもウキウキしていました。
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klennon79
(0) 2006-06-03 22:38
Hi Nobe. Welcome to TE.
This is an interesting photo. I like the perspective and the contrast between something natural and something man-made. I would make the photo larger--I think the photo can be as large as 200 pixels. I might add some more information about the tower and why you chose to include it in the background.
Thank you for sharing a glimps of life in Tokyo. I look forward to seeing more of you pics :)
Kirsten
s10001in
(0) 2006-06-03 23:03 [Comment]
Klapaucius
(627) 2006-06-04 6:52
Hi Kumiko. ^_^
Konnichiwa! Welcome to Trek Earth!
I am going to say this is a great start, even though the image is not perfect.
The colours are great, and compliment each other very well.
The composition is also great, and I like how the natural beauty of the cherry blossom is contrasted by the technological Tokyo Tower.
However, the image is small. You have made it small in order to post it on Trek Earth, I think. The limit on Trek Earth is 800x800 pixels (800 wide, and 800 tall). The file size limit is 200kb. Try to get your images as big as you can, while staying under 200kb file size and a maximum of 800 pixels wide.
Keep it up! Ganbatte! ^_^
Regards,
Richard
Edit: I have done a workshop edit for you. ^_^ Please look at it and tell me what you think.
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