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Cette jeune serveuse de restaurant prend une petite pause entre deux clients. Nous sommes tout pr鑚 du Canal St-Martin � Paris.

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jjcordier (79299) 2012-04-11 23:11

Diane
Tr鑚 bonne photo. Tu as parfaitement "mis en sc鈩e" cette serveuse au chapeau dans cette tr鑚 bonne composition o� m麥e le bonhomme vert tient toute sa place. je dirais que tu as trouv� la bonne "formule du jour"-)
Amicalement
JJ

TopGeo (38220) 2012-04-11 23:34

Hello Diane! A look at the composition charms simplicity of lines and the study's framework where reality meets or imaginary, so like a dream, the truth that gives results and artistic design of the mind, impress the selection bravo!
Best regards
Georgios

DINOZOR (16452) 2012-04-12 0:01

Hello Diane,

J'ai appr馗i� toutes les prises que tu as r饌lis馥s � Paris avec une volont� certaine de voir et de photographier bon nombre de lieux c駘鐫res photographiquement parlant.
Ici la gestuelle de la madame est bien captur馥 et le petit bonhomme vert du feu tricolor apporte une note amusante et color馥.Peut 黎re un cadrage un peu plus serr� clarifierait la lecture de l'image.
Cordialement.

carlo62 (81265) 2012-04-12 0:53

Ciao Diane
il semaforo verde sembra aver dato via libera alla ragazza per prendersi qualche minuto di riposo.
Bella composizione con la ragazza spastata a destra concentrata a guardare ci� che noi non possiamo vedere.
Saluti
Carlo

jacquest (19269) 2012-04-12 3:41

Bonjour Diane,

C'est tr鑚 bien r饌lis� cette sc鈩e. La serveuse est bien plac馥 sur cette belle fa軋de en bois. Le lampadaire et le petit bonhomme vert sont de bonnes additions. Clart� et couleurs au rendez-vous.
Curieux de prendre un pause pour fumer et raccourcir ses jours.

Salutations

Jacques

Hansaphotos (11381) 2012-04-12 6:33

Hi Diane

I like this composition a lot, kind of thoght provoking. Little details as you`ve captured it when there was a green walking man on the traffic light instead of the red standing one enhances the composition and becomes the icing of the cake, in my opinion. Beautiful work:) TFS. Have a nice day.

Best regards, Erling

gildasjan (43826) 2012-04-12 7:09

Bonjour Diane
j'aime beaucoup cette composition avec cette femme au chapeau fumant sa cigarette et regardant et pensant ce qu'on aimerait deviner.C'est tout simple et bien r饌lis�.C'est tout simple,j'aime beaucoup le positionnement de cette personne qui je suppose travaille dans cet 騁ablissement.C'est une sc鈩e de vie tr鑚 bien fig馥.
J'aime beaucoup
Amicalement
gildas

diomed (13926) 2012-04-12 9:57

Bonjour Diane,
jolie mise en scene de cette fille qui regarde des choses que nous ne voyons pas. Un close up de vie citoyenne, une sc鈩e tr鑚 bien r饌liz馥.
Bonne journ馥
Antonio

Gigidusud (21679) 2012-04-12 12:44

Bonsoir Diane,
Belle sc鈩e de vie quotidienne avec de jolis d騁ails.Bien vu,bravo!
Ghislaine

lakshmip1949 (19081) 2012-04-12 13:56

Hello Diane,

This is a very spontaneous capture where the lady is having a light. Looks like she works in the shop and having a break. Like the way she is standing. Nice brown color wall with black lamppost. The green light is definitely a plus.

Lakshmi

Afsanehbagheri (3228) 2012-04-14 12:06

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bebbetto (122) 2012-04-14 13:54

ciao Diane
Very good picture. You captured a beautiful moment of the human life ! The girl is pensive and concentrated on her cigarette. Excellent composition
Regards

ThierryA (6704) 2012-04-15 7:26

Bonjour,

Un beau clich� parisien avec cette fa軋de de bistrot � l'ancienne. J'aime bien le cadrage choisi, bien vu !

Bon dimanche,
Thierry

rabdelnoor (3423) 2012-04-15 19:19

Hi Diane,
Very nice composition. The scene is rich in different elements, that are well balanced. The green walk signal added a good dinamism to the picture. Nicely done.
Ricardo

karacabeylis (1471) 2012-04-16 7:12

a nice shot indeed

lpi (4857) 2012-04-21 8:32

Salut Diane,
Une jolie sc鈩e de rue tr鑚 bien compos馥!
Joli shot, bien vu!
Amicalement,
Lpi

willperrett (14215) 2012-04-25 5:02

Hello Diane
Sorry I missed this one when you first posted it. I love street photography - not that I'm very good at it - and this is a very good example of the genre. The insouciant bystander obviously makes the picture: without her (and the little green man as a counterpoint) I know you wouldn't have taken it. A minor classic!
Regards
Will

CLODO (45116) 2012-04-25 8:22

Bonjour Diane

c'est le genre de sc鈩e de rue qu'on voit tous les jours, mais sans regarder, no penser ou oser photographier. Pose cigarette, tout en d馗otraction, avant de reprendre le boulot.
Bonne soir馥
CLODO

fotka (8993) 2012-04-27 5:54

Hi Diana,
Superb daily life photo from Paris. It looks like people can't smoke in restaurants in France. A new policy that more and more countries are adopting. The photo has good compo, light, colors, sharpness.
Have a niece weekend,
Zbigniew

kennyblack (4207) 2012-05-10 13:59

Bonjour Diane
Belle composition et un grand effet. Photos tr鑚 bien con輹 et construit. De belles couleurs et de d馭inition. Vous avez fait un excellent travail, f駘icitations et merci pour le partage.
Salutations, bonne soir馥 ... Marino

aliabazari (22149) 2012-05-28 22:11

Hi Diane
Registration is very good and beauty. Very good lighting and composition.
Thanks and regards

jcpix (14030) 2012-10-21 11:03

Bonjour Diane,

This is a wonderfully representative photo of life, I've never seen so many employees taking smoke breaks just outside of their place of work as I have in France. This captures such great every day life and portrays that perfectly in its simplicity. Bravo!

Regards,

Jason

thebest (4276) 2012-11-12 19:24

Hi Diane.

A very artistic photo... being in the right place at the right time - the waitress having her daily ' well earned cigarette '
Excellent POV & Clarity & I love the little green man!!!
Well done I like it very much.

Kind regards,
Dawn.

Romano46 (18472) 2013-10-29 11:05

Ciao Diane
questa tua foto non l'avevo mai notata ed eppure � straordinaria per la perfezione della composizione, nella quale tutto � al giusto posto, ma soprattutto, per il soggetto.
E' la classifa foto di strada. mediante la quale si cerca di cogliere momenti ed atteggiamenti della vita che ci circonda, ed in questo sei stata straordinaria nel cogliere questo momento di vita parigina, il tutto per� senza sacrificare colore e composizione.
Bravissima.
Ciao e buona serata
Romano

wolf38 (30) 2014-01-31 6:55

Hello Diane. It looks like a classic photo! The illusion would be perfect as a black and white version. Composition and everything else well.
Rgds, Wolfgang.
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